Raise Your Lantern
I am a shaman and this is my spell;My flickering dream on the cavern wall;A nursery rhyme echoing down a well;An inkling of recognition recalled.I was a restless, hopeful apprenticeYearning for...
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Radiate from within....my way of thinking as well. A beautiful write...and a one to re-read often... GloriaBy looking inward instead of above;To where all things are truly connected
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Very wise write......lovely flow too.......if we would only believe. Our own lights would surely shine~ *s*
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Thank you both, Ladies... This one seems a little stiff near the end... On review, it sounds a little preachy... In any event... I'm glad you like it!Kevin
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I tend to agree with you here Kevin. I think you tried to rush it and ended up tightening it.Partir cst mourir un peu.
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Yeah, Terry.. It needs about four more lines... I'm in production right now... we'll see how it goes!KevinP.S. There... I tweaked it... I think that's a little more palatable... even thought it has an...
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